tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7625395820364255340.post3161526159286338972..comments2023-09-25T02:11:03.592-07:00Comments on Wild Goose Scoops Moon: The littered fieldgabriellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7625395820364255340.post-7139469845047688962012-08-18T19:06:52.501-07:002012-08-18T19:06:52.501-07:00Oh that last stanza just gets me. Passion, grit, ...Oh that last stanza just gets me. Passion, grit, the danger of loss. Loss. SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7625395820364255340.post-89889838588414119992012-08-18T07:36:27.472-07:002012-08-18T07:36:27.472-07:00beautifully done
I love what you said about how i...beautifully done<br /><br />I love what you said about how it shows that Hope is loved, thank you :)Diannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02946500110072411468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7625395820364255340.post-30561523023879382322012-08-17T23:40:40.267-07:002012-08-17T23:40:40.267-07:00Gorgeous!Gorgeous!Susan Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13241514922366571247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7625395820364255340.post-83925431428111459752012-08-17T17:39:18.126-07:002012-08-17T17:39:18.126-07:00interesting...!!interesting...!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7625395820364255340.post-82351626450224117542012-08-17T08:59:48.264-07:002012-08-17T08:59:48.264-07:00Thanks oldegg for your very perceptive comment. I...Thanks oldegg for your very perceptive comment. It certainly has felt that way to me. I was working from memory and the concept of things recycled.<br /><br />Glad you enjoyed, MadKane<br /><br />Music! The highest compliment. Thanks, Green Speck<br /><br />Thanks for your visit and your thoughts, Mama Zen.<br /><br />Daydreamertoo. If only. Sigh.<br /><br />Hi Jim. It's good to be writing again, though it's different this time.<br />This poem was inspired by memories.<br />And yes, by both natural and unnatural processes.<br />I returned to the place of my birth and found the apartment building had been demolished. Gazing through barbed wire onto an open field of weeds and rubble, I recall there was no nostalgia, only wonder. The next time I visited, there was a burgeoning community garden in its place.<br />gabriellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7625395820364255340.post-71883520693714777622012-08-17T08:50:33.145-07:002012-08-17T08:50:33.145-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.gabriellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7625395820364255340.post-21790440435301844212012-08-17T07:54:24.823-07:002012-08-17T07:54:24.823-07:00Hi Gabrielle :) ~~ Nice to see you writing again....Hi Gabrielle :) ~~ Nice to see you writing again. This is a nice little poem. It brings memories.<br /><br />On the Interstate to Galveston I have watched fields turn into junk yards turn into fishing holes and now are completely under water, just a part of the bay/marsh collection.<br /><br />This is a product of both the subsidence and of the global warming sea level increase.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7625395820364255340.post-15154216165978209832012-08-16T04:02:20.450-07:002012-08-16T04:02:20.450-07:00Lovely.It almost sounds like paradise. If only.
L...Lovely.It almost sounds like paradise. If only. <br />Lovely poem.Daydreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139175719967937843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7625395820364255340.post-48559350568521088852012-08-14T20:19:35.339-07:002012-08-14T20:19:35.339-07:00Really cool piece.Really cool piece.Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7625395820364255340.post-55435588895096462662012-08-14T03:53:52.680-07:002012-08-14T03:53:52.680-07:00I loved the flow of words ... musical indeed !!!I loved the flow of words ... musical indeed !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7625395820364255340.post-56867617226464641022012-08-13T23:57:03.353-07:002012-08-13T23:57:03.353-07:00What a powerful poem. Well done!
Madeleine Begun K...What a powerful poem. Well done!<br /><a href="http://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/" rel="nofollow">Madeleine Begun Kane</a>Madeleine Begun Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12290268300271622956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7625395820364255340.post-25997256325139865402012-08-13T23:55:31.350-07:002012-08-13T23:55:31.350-07:00I read this aloud to myself and I found my voice g...I read this aloud to myself and I found my voice grated as the hard edged phrases came alive in my mind like an uneasy dream where I was both in and out of control. Curiously satisfying.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.com