Welcoming. What a wonderful theme.
I was walking around the lake near to my home. In July. Just noticing. Typically my poems are seeded in transit. I’ve often been queried about my peculiar habits. I just say that I’m a naturalist taking notes. Then they leave me alone.
It was a really hot day. And things that were in full bloom were wilting on the vine.
July
No poems today
The white cat sleeps
It’s simply too hot
for
fights or philosophy
Summer crests
Strawberry to full buck
Under cover
I spy:
preppy terriers,
shanghai express matte,
petty quarrels
Nets slack
from last night’s imperative volley
This could be Biloxi
All drawl and wisteria
A caravan of lawn chairs
redefine the coast
Fluorescent algae bloom
Think they can improve on death
Congee convene
Green looks brown
Waterlogged
Soggy
At the heart of it all
At the heart
And the liver
And the tired pancreas
Brown in the middle
This is the way death will come
Not as Genghis Khan or Columbus
But as an insider, a familiar, a friend.
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9 comments:
Wonderful. I especially like that last stanza. Perfection.
This is wonderfully atmospheric; every sense is palpable. I really enjoyed this with the kind of enthusiasm that's tinged with envy - it's so good!!
I love the feel of this poem. Welcome to OSI! I look forward to reading your work.
The ending is perfect. The whole thing was intriguing.
I feel like I am listening to a breeze as I read your poem. Lovely.
The ending is perfect. It reminds me of TS. Elliot " This is the way the world end! This is the Way the World ends! Not with a bang but a whimper."
A wonderful read - the flow is gentle and tumbles lightly over deep thoughts.
Dear Friend,
There is a wild grace in every word you have written here...
I came to let you know how your words moved me.
Thank you for sharing your light,
For burning through the night,
Blessings of peace, M
.."things that were in full bloom were wilting on the vine"..
& a strange night perhaps..
..when the hurt no more hurts..
many thanks..
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