Sunday, April 5, 2009

One Single Impression: Listening

still not sleepy?

go outside
and put your
ear to the earth
you can hear
puddles vibrating
with insects

close your eyes
for a moment
you can hear
cobalt sky opening
to a starling’s
brush stroke

take a stroll
beyond the city limits
You can hear
wheat ripening
in the field
not yet

Photographer: Cayce from malaysia

in the wee hours
if you are very still
and not trying
to write good poetry
you can hear
a song behind a song


floreta said...

this is how i write. if you stop trying, something will come out. a song behind a song :)

SandyCarlson said...

I am just imagining listening at the puddle. So sensitive and beautiful. Thanks.

Tumblewords: said...

Lovely work. The sounds and imagery are superb...

the walking man said...

You have presented wonderful imagery to these tired old eyes Gabrielle, thank you for a lift this early morning.

Deborah Godin said...

I think you have done both - listened in a deeper way and written a good poem. A very good poem.

Raven said...

These are both beautiful. You have such a gift for conveying delicate meaning. For some reason the comparison I want to make here is that it is like a fine, delicately wrought filagree (did I spell that right?). In any case, it's beautiful.

Regina Marie said...

This was fantastic! I soo enjoyed this!

Amias said...

This was a beautiful spring song ... and with nature, nothing could be better.

"a song behind a song" ...
how delightful! A poem behind a poem.

be said...

this morning i walked, still in darkness n i heard....
a thick wall of sounds
birds in every bush n tree full of songs
when the sun came up they became busy with other things