Thanks to Sweetest in the Gale for this week's prompt, fog.
fog
mornings
heavy and damp
hang
as doppelgangers
I have been
here before
afraid
at times like this
the tired air
must be plucked
tenderly
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About Me
- gabrielle
- I live in South Minneapolis with Chris, Emma and Sauvi. We make good trouble together. I am committed to living in such a way as to engender peace and social justice, ecology and sustainability, and cultural, spiritual and artistic expression and exchange. I am interested in dialogue about the core of the human experience.
19 comments:
Amazing how the fog is seen on land and water.
Great photo and poem.
You approach fog delicately and correctly.
i love your peotic take on fog
Indeed it must. Beautiful!
beautiful ..
The fog is bringing out the eerieness here.
You are not alone in your fog. I sense from reading the others some of those writers are lurking right beside you hidden by the fog (as doppelgangers).
..
what great images in your poem. they've got me thinking and seeing a lot.
'I have been here before' sings of events that proffered strong lessons. Lovely!
Delicate poem.
I felt that way for years. I feel better now.
This moved me deeply... Such a tender piece... lots of resonance for here, Gabrielle.
Most excellent lines.
ahhh the tired air
the image is lovely
the beauty of not being afraid of fog is that with a simple wisp of breath you can change the shape of it.
I LOVE this poem! I have been there too and know that feeling. Your pic is beautiful!
I love your words, especially the last two lines, beautiful!
Great photo too.
the eerie feeling of deja vu aptly captured here ('i have been here before afraid'') - lovely!
the tired air
must be plucked
tenderly
cannot begin to tell you how exquisite these lines are!
gorgeous!
JP/deb
Beautiful.
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