Thanks to Joseph Harker of Naming Constellations for this week's prompt, talisman.
Arcturus
thoughts dart
senseless
‘neath foamy krill
lidded whys
trawl
unwitnessed
neither heads nor tails
I am a red star
fading
take my years
I am jasper
in your palm
8 comments:
something about this poem, I dont know exactly what, but something just makes me swoon. Lovely, lovely.
very intimate...orginal!
that is just so sweet and lovely..
i am already done with 'conquer'..i am fast...lol!
I really love what you done with this, lots of meaning and suggestion lurking under the surface... nice!
beautiful ..
All of the stars and galaxies are gems in your palm.
A€ beautiful poem. Thanks.
Hi Gabrielle, I missed this until tonight. It is wonderfully written in the first tense. I like it a lot!
I have both last weeks and this weeks up, you will have to scroll down a bit for 'talisman.'
I'd like you to read it, it is sort of funny.
I am sorry about your family situation and will be praying for you all. God does hear our prayers.
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