Reeds rise
improbable,
vegetable and vein
where the clouds
have fallen
in them
they are
their own
separate island
a swimmer's pate
bobbing
on the chilly bones
of March
hollow reeds
the wind
whistles through them
a thin high song
rising
Written for OSI, "hollow"
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7 comments:
"bobbing on the chilly bones of March..."
Brilliant. I could see, hear and feel this one through and through.
nice images...well said!
Those reeds shape summer.
Beautiful post.
Lovely imagery in this.
Great diction and flow.Like the bald pate image, too.
Beautiful imagery!
Mad Kane
creatively cool.
love your poetry talent here,
inviting you to join Poets Rally by submitting a poem, any poem is welcome.
hope to see you in.
keep entertaining!
You Rock!
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