It begins
with a quiver
of thought
so thin
the wind
blows through it
the wind
becomes a word
for “thank you”
and so it spreads
like welcome rain.
if you wait,
they will come:
broomsedge to goldenrod,
sweetgum to winged elm
an epidemic of tall trees,
supple, arriving
on the edge of ice.
I have taken lately to following the slightest sliver of impulse to contact a friend. I want to be promiscuous with these impulses. Risking decorum, defying temperament, I make the call. I have to believe these seeds are as opportunistic as any and will take hold in lava fields, on glacial tills, on craggy hillsides. Around the world, lands which have been laid bare by fires or humans follow a similar pattern of recovery. This pattern is referred to as "natural succession."
14 comments:
bless you!
follow these impulses, poet!
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If the impulse feels right, that's the path, I guess.
interesting thoughts!
Wow Gabrielle this is very creative, I loved it!
Your verses are so beautiful! I love the second stanza. Beautiful writing. I hope this phone call leads to something wonderful!
A very different take on the prompt.. made me think..thanks..
LOVED that! Follow that impulse- it can lead to wonderful things... And you will never know unless you try... Good luck- and it will be as it is suppposed to be!!!
Your poem is lovely, as is the prose poem.
Epidemics of various kinds are started by the promiscuous, germs and seeds and smiles and other items we can name. And by the sowers of these.
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We must. Indeed. You inspire me and warm my heart. Which needed a touch of warmth.
very promising...
inspiring.... raising hopes...
too good!
very promising...
inspiring.... raising hopes...
too good!
That is an epidemic I can get behind! :)
Little tentative puffs building up into mighty exhalations..what a wonderful thought..Jae
Gorgeous work and impulse!
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