Daybreak
lonely speck astride
sunstreaked pane, grows hooves then mane
daybreak clattering
written for Haiku Heights, prompt "flaw"
J'Accuse
Strauss-Kahn hyphenate
J'accuse!!! maid's flaws daily inked,
her name: a soiled sheet
written for Haiku Heights, "flaw"
10 comments:
Oh wow this is amazing
I love your musical language!
quite beautiful thought :) thanks for sharing!
original!!
very lyrical especially the 2nd ku
These are wonderful. I like following the images that daybreak draws on a window. Daybreak is an invitation to dream.
And the other...the women always are at the worst end of these things.
fascinating!
love both of these pieces ... the last line on the second, her name: a soiled sheet is awesome!
Gabrielle,
Your prompt, "weed," comes up at OSI this Sunday, Sept. 4. Would you send me a poem by Saturday?
I love "Daybreak" Makes me graphically 'see' what you mean!
Rosie
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