Monday, March 15, 2010

Murmur

Murmur

speckled trout murmur
below blue ice
still in a dream

19 comments:

Aayushi Mehta said...

"still in a dream"
:)
Like many of us so often are! Loved this!

anthonynorth said...

That was nicely done. I can imagine it.

zoya gautam said...

.. this is good & liked ur previous poem a lot too ..

SandyCarlson said...

How it feels this time of year. All that wonder. Beautiful.

the walking man said...

The ice melts faster as the water neath it runs swifter. Friction is like that.

Tammie Lee said...

oh, I really like your poem.

Rob said...

Enjoyed this haiku, thank you for sharing…
…rob
Image & Verse

Tumblewords: said...

I love this visual image!

The Write Girl said...

So vivid and imaginative in few words. Nicely written.

Mojo said...

"Still in a dream" Yes. Frozen in a dream. Waiting.

Love it.

kathryn said...

Very cool. Thanks for the visit & comment at my place!

Leo said...

just so lovely imagery..! :)

Maggie said...

How wonderful to see the trout so active after the Spring thaw...whether in the water or the mind

Geraldine said...

Oh how dreamy and beautiful!

TomCat said...

Gabrielle, you make me miss Colorado and the memory of flipping a spinner onto an ice shelf and pulling it slowly into the stream.

pink said...

nice job! waiting for your new artical. ........................................

Patti said...

I love the "still in a dream"...and they will wake up soon as Spring arrives and stirs them up! Have a great week!

shedreamsofthesea said...

still in a dream, how lovely.

JP/deb said...

a few brief words craft a strong image ... lovely. JP/deb