Tuesday, April 13, 2010

Hollow reed singing

hollow reed singing
humdrum commute enlivened
daji embouchure

(A second offering for bamboo prompt. Inspired by memories of subway mind shifting thanks to forest song.)


Anonymous said...

I can almost hear the sound.

Stan Ski said...

As good as the first!
I did a second too.

JP/deb said...

lovely offering -
inspired memories make us

the walking man said...

Hollowing out is the chore that makes music from being hollowed.

Poetikat said...

There's a real onomatopeia to this that I like very much—the humming is resonating in my mind's ear.


Anonymous said...

thx u very much, i learn a lot