Sunday, April 4, 2010

Two leaves

Two leaves

two leaves
in a chase
a quiet corridor
crackling
with laughter

15 comments:

anthonynorth said...

Love the image you invoke here.

SandyCarlson said...

My mind goes straight to the space between those leaves. My mind goes straight to the space between me and a friend today and how we closed it with feeling familiar and saying very little. Thanks for this poem.

And thanks for your beautiful comment on my blog.

Mojo said...

If I close my eyes and listen I can hear the laughter. Beautiful.

Amity said...

two meanings...i am guessing what...

but the laughters overcame the other thought!

Aayushi Mehta said...

:) lovely!

the walking man said...

That sounds like a chase i could have with my granddaughter and crackle my way through it til she caught me.

Pearl said...

that's beautiful. love the whimsy and light-heartedness of it.

Sandra (if) said...

so intimate and lovely image...!

Titanium said...

I love that there is no end to this story...

The laughter, the leaves, and all these things that come and go- so perfectly captured, here.

Tumblewords: said...

Lovely imagery! And sound! Wonderful.

sandy, from fourwinds said...

That would make me laugh, too.

I can see anthem on my reader, but can't find it here!
It is good!

Tammie Lee said...

a lovely moment~

shedreamsofthesea said...

I can hear the laughter, beautiful.

TomCat said...

I can't explain why I like this. I just do.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Just lovely. Well written.



Melanie