Wednesday, June 2, 2010

What does the oak see

What does the oak see

What does the oak see
as she bows to the river
rippling with song?

for Haiku Bones, "miracle" and for OSI, "love"

10 comments:

Aayushi Mehta said...

What a beautiful question. Wondrous.

TomCat said...

I can only hope that she is situated where she does not see oil fouling her roots.

Sandra (if) said...

interesting wondering...!

fourwindshaiga said...

Don't you just wonder? This is a beautiful poem.

Carlos Gesmundo said...

What only those in love will see...
and they will be different--one from the other.

Lovely verse.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Just love it. So beautiful.



Melanie

Bruce Miller said...

I love the potential ambiguity of "rippling with song" -- the tree? the water? A wonderful quantum of meaning.

Raven said...

Beautiful. Your poetry is always exquisite.

Jingle said...

love your question.

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