Sunday, October 10, 2010

she is feral

she is feral

she is smooth

a gem

tearing down love

wild in bloom

rushing home

Written for OSI, "lonely" and Sunday Scribblings, "essential".


gautami tripathy said...

Sad, in a way!

dad, farther and farther away

Amity said...

in any way, it is sad!

LeiffyV said...

Marvelous, the raw emotion in this is fantastic! I love it!

ρομπερτ said...

yet a glimpse of hope, being able to reach back home.

please have a good wednesday.

daily athens

Sandra.if said...

intriguing...nice words!

Reflections said...

raw... sad... I like the gem tearing down love.

Patti said...

nicely done~

SandyCarlson said...

You have me thinking of those folks who don't stick around, who are all passion and fire this minute and ash the next. How to keep the passion alive, how to bring the conversation indoors from the wild.

Cloudia said...

I love the gravity of these words.

Aloha from Honolulu

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