Thanks to Geraldine of Poetic Paths for this week’s prompt, fragrance. Be sure to spend time at all the poets’ roosts, drinking in their words.
Stone fruit
You have heard
about such things
happening
shamans, midwives
reaching in with the blades
of their hands
pulling up
tumors
the size of pomelos
one day it came to her
clearly
as she was shelling peas
now that the flesh
was falling away
and the lining
of what had defined her
was shaved to its pith.
(just how unbound
she was. )
she reached into her belly
and pulled out a stone
still warm
wrapped it in parchment
and buried it like
the dead sea scrolls
a girl
coarse plaited hair
and anthracite eyes
toes dug into the slope of summer
spied it among the seaweed
at neap tide
restless fingers traced the grooves
awakening
the fragrance of apricot,
cypress,
Darjeeling tea
it was then
that she caught
a first glimpse of
frangipane
on the mountain top.
27 comments:
This was so beautiful...the imagery was so ripe and rich with the earth and life. Just gorgeous!
There are so many levels to this piece I am going to have to re read it for the third time. It is truly a jewel.
What a strange story, a little horrific in its poetry.
Wonderful images. I loved it!
very mystical. I especially like the beginning, with the reference to midwives and shamans.
How sad it must be. I have heard of the predicament you described. You carried it here to a final resolution.
And then the finder of the disposed object, her feelings at first.
But then when bizzare things come to light I'd rather have lemon curd just outside my purview, no frangipane for me. :-)
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Thank you all for your patience and your interest with Stone Fruit.
I can see how some of the references in this poem can be cryptic and even frightening. It is not about illness or suffering, but rather depicts a moment in time when a woman realizes she is no longer bound to the gravitational tug of tidal cycles. This allows her to deliver the gift of her years to a young girl who is just coming of age.
What a gorgeous blend of natural beauty and folklore. Lovely.
This is really nice. Sometimes horrific, sometimes nature. End of it beautiful description.
Beautiful ... I love the beginning most of all.
its a sad poem but it was a noteworthy read.
Thanks Gabrielle. Your comment did give closure here as I was imagining some very disturbing illness for your lady.
Instead you have written a sweet and beautiful account of the changing physiology of womanhood.
I still do like lemon curd better than frangipane. Besides my dermatologist's diagnosis of severe dermatology and my combined allergy and ex-smoker , my colonoscopy doctor (interologist) has taken me off nuts.
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Caveat Emptor: The above situation is true. Not everything I tell in my 'poems' alluding to personal situations are true for me, Jim.
There is also another fictional 'me' lurking in the back of my mind who sometimes directs my writing thoughts for first person tales.
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a wonderful journal to finding something sweet, long buried but still hold time's fragrance
my favorite line is "toes dug into the slope of summer"
your words are so ripe & full of life's abundance...this was a glorious thing to read
thank you for the poetic journey. Your words make me sigh sweetly.
Spirithelpers
I love this:
she reached into her belly
and pulled out a stone
still warm
wrapped it in parchment
and buried it like
the dead sea scrolls
This poem is beautiful!
The crone speaks with the stone of fruit! I love this. The rhythm and imagery are full of power and mysticism.
The passing of the knowledge from the aged to be found easily by the young at the right time. I like this very much. All things in due course.
Glorious words, Beautiful images,
I can smell the frangipanni on the mountain top my sister,
The world is moving towards unboundedness,
Much love,
M
I re read this a few times and each time found a different layer...beautifully written!
delectable!
thanks : )
My goodness, Gabrielle! Am I following you? If I'm not, I'm out of my mind! This is incredible. I loved it and will now be reading it again (and again). I would be pleased if you would read my earlier piece here: http://hyggedigter.blogspot.com/2009/05/sea-of-change.html
Thanks!
I'll be back!
Kat
It is a wonderful thing to see ourself at any age as none other may have that pleasure except during the first harvest.
Loved this poem
thank you,Gabrielle
your words are rather pristine,vivid and angelic
so original and powerful words!
beautifully said...
i love following your blog...
Exquisite... I have not checked in for way too long.
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