Friday, February 21, 2014

Dream, dream, dream



Dream, dream, dream

It was beautiful
the overdubbing
It didn't take long
to figure out
that all the voices
were yours.

For Heretomost’s challenge at Real Toads about “mixed tapes” in 300,000 words or less.

12 comments:

Kerry O'Connor said...

That would really be something special.

Ella said...

Yes, I agree how wonderful!

Herotomost said...

That is ultimately what we reach for I think. A better way to say what and how we feel, and sometimes one coice just isn't enough! Loved this, a short punch with loves notes pinned to the chest. Great job, thanks!!!

Mama Zen said...

Wow. This is gorgeous.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Oh I love this!

Helen said...

You aced it .. in so few lines!

whimsygizmo said...

Nice!

Susie Clevenger said...

Beautiful...

grapeling said...

perfect ~

Margaret said...

Adorable and far less than 300,000 words. ha ha I didn't get a chance to do this challenge yet but I did find my husbands tapes from 25 years ago…. His "party tapes" ;)

sharplittlepencil.com said...

Gabrielle, such love of the human voice in your poem. Part of me, the musician, thinks about the countless overdubs I and other singers had to do when well-meaning backup singers didn't show up.

And part of me is in that place of all the voices in one's head, each with a different idea, task, or demand want your attention all at once. A thought-provoking, intriguing poem!

Thanks for stopping by and offering your prayers. Sorry it took this long to reciprocate the visit. Peace, Amy

Sandra said...

you surprise me ...as always!